As human beings
we often find ourselves comparing and contrasting the things around us whether
we realize we're doing it or not. The reason we compare and contrast is so that
we know what the best decision for us to make is. We compare and contrast
options all the time whether that decision is regarding what the best camera
for us to buy is, what college is best for us to attend, or even if it’s worth
it to stay up and watch a marathon of our favorite show. In his Op-Ed Roger
Cohen compares and contrast what sort of life is worth living while analyzing
the dietary habits of two rhesus monkeys.
The monkeys discussed in Cohen's essay are
Canto and Owen. These two monkeys have lived in the same environment, yet they
have lead very different lives all because of their different diets. Canto who
is 27 years old has lived a life of restrictions because he has been forced to
intake 30% percent less calories than a monkey normally would. On the other
hand, 29-year-old Owen has lived a life of relative bliss all because he has
been able to eat whatever he liked. In his essay, Cohen mostly highlights the
differences that these two monkeys have experienced that. For instance, in his
essay Cohen writes, "Canto looks drawn, weary, ashen and miserable in his
thinness, mouth slightly agape, features pinched, eyes blank, his expression
screaming. On the other hand, Cohen writes that Owen appeared to be, “a happy
camper with a wry smile, every inch the laid-back simian, plump, eyes
twinkling, full mouth relaxed, skin glowing, exuding wisdom as if he’s just
read Kierkegaard and concluded that “Life must be lived forward, but can only
be understood backward.”
In his Op-Ed,
Cohen argues that a life of restrictions is not a life worth living. Cohen
believes that there is no point to living a long life if we have to be
miserable every step of the way, and I have to agree. If given the choice of living thirty years of
happiness and bliss or living to 109 while suffering from Alzheimer’s, I would
choose to die at thirty every time. Really the decision is simple, quality
while always be more important than quantity. Our lives shouldn’t be measured
by the number of days we live, but by the way we live. We all have to die
eventually, so why live a life filled with restrictions? I think the Roman’s
said it best when they said carpe diem.
I love your opening sentences and how you transitioned into the following paragraphs. It was quite detailed and informative. The only thing I recommend is to add in-text citations but other than that great response ! :)
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